Recited and written by TJ
with echoed sound effects
audio, Poem,photo Creative Writing... ,
#9 The photo green, twisted and distorted image as she sits....
Reminded me of a fantasy Counselor I would seek if there was a place to receive counsel for the feelings of indulgence. She speaks to me...
I am the image of Indulgence
You have come to me before.
I heard your mumbled intentions
Stumbling
Falling
knocking at my door.
Again I must remind you
All five senses are a gift.
I've ask for your intentions
Foggy
Soggy
And Only what If's.
Dont make yourself False promise
Adding this to existing sins.
Chocolate
Fast foods
Ahh yes let's not forget the Gin.
Now pull yourself together
Try harder before you begin
I can see it in your eyes
Excuses
Mortal Lies
You will fumble and stand before Indulgence once again.
~:~:~:~
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6 comments:
WOW, my computer let me hear it all! I LOVED hearing this come from you, too damn cool. I know exactly what this poem speaks of. ALS kicked indugence butt! Too bad it took a two by four :) I was stumped when I saw that picture, but it really works.
My favorite part was hearing you!
Love you my talented, big hearted friend!
cool beans! Brilliantly done - I too, was stumped with this picture, but you nailed it, TJ! And the reading was bloody impressive! Kudos all around!
I added a brief explaination of what I seen her to be...laughing! I seen a fantasy medium for help with green feelings of indulgence.
oh my mind does take mini trips!
Freaking awesome!!!
(cussing from a nice Christian girl.)
LOL
xxooxxoo
who is playing istead of working too...
LOL, love it...very well done. Great to hear you read it, made it all that much more enjoyable.
Smiles,
Wow! What a great idea! It`s a shame we all can`t do that!
Hugs,
V
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