An Angel

3rd person view

The angel burst forth

Out of the ocean

Causing tidal waves

And stirring the violent winds

About her body

Wings brilliantly lit

Casting down a shadow

That covered the sea

From the sun overhead

Only she could not escape

The grip held by the ribbons

Looking so innocent at first

But actually binding her forever

To an eternity of short breaths

From the watery depths of solitude

She had been cursed to endure

For loving a human

Over her God

2nd person view

You have disgraced me angel

Loving a false idol

Such as a human

More than me

For this you are baned

For an eternity

To wage war against the sea

Slowly sinking

If you do not fight

With all that you are

To stay above water

And catch a glimpse

Of the glory of heaven

You left behind

1st person view

I only wanted a glimpse

Of what it was like

This life on earth

We are teased with

But never get to be part of

As angels

Yes I took a man

But I never held them higher

Than you my Lord

Why must you punish me

With these chains of silk

Looking so easy to escape

But being made by you, perfect

And unbreakable

How long must I suffer

Before you release me

Let me fly back to your glory

And lavish you with my obedience

Kisses, Prayers, and Love

New Photo- a Challenge for your expression

Three choices are first person, second person, and third person.


Writers please decide from what point of view you want to express your ideas.

First person indicates the writer is the speaker or narrator. This form is most commonly used when writing about personal experiences or in expressing one's own opinion. The first person pronouns include I, me, my, mine, we, our, and ours.

Second person indicates the person to whom the writer is speaking. This form is most commonly used when describing a process, giving directions or advice, or in coorespondence--letters directed to a specific individual. The second person pronouns include you and yours.

Third person indicates the person (or thing) about whom the writer is speaking, to refer to other people. In addition to being used when the writer prefers to present a story from someone else's point of view, this form is generally preferred in more formal expository writing such as research papers and business reports. The third person pronouns include she, he, her, him, hers, his, it, its, they, them, theirs.

Hope to see alot of different views.
I thought this picture could be a photo of no expressed gender for the writing project.
Poetry, story, haiku, anything goes...
Can't wait to read you!!