6.26.2006

Jodi's challenge of the teardrop

Life dwells
on the tip of a teardrop
Slowly it slips
and falls
from the interior
of the human soul,
a tunnel,
a passageway,
a glimpse
into a tornado of feelings
whirling inside the heart
so beautiful
delicate
fragile
and clear
uncapturable in its true form
the essence of all complete feelings.
For a moment
it dangles
it hovers
over the edge,
then
ever so slowly,
slides away into a destiny
of nothing.

by derek/

5 comments:

Jod{i} said...

Oh Derek powerful imagery! I love it!

Orion said...

simply gorgeous, Derek! Bravo!!!

Pete said...

Beautiful

Tammy said...

WOW Derek this is excellent! Superb! Brilliant!

writerwoman said...

That is really pretty. I loved the way it washed over me like a river of tender emotional pain.